domingo, 8 de marzo de 2009

International Women’s Day

Today is the International Women’s Day, that‘s celebrated around the world each 8 March. It’s an important day to celebrate the achievements that women have done during the past.

In many countries they are marching to demand more rights for women because, unfortunately, in the twenty - first century there are a lot of women without the same rights as men like the same payroll, social justice, health-care……so on.

It’s a day to celebrate the past achievements and what they are going to do and can do in the future.

¡¡ Happy day to all women !!

1 comentario:

Nuria Vidal dijo...

Thanks for mentioning this topic!

However, I have the feeling that you wrote it in a hurry. Have a look:

-to celebrate the achievementS that women have done during the PAST.
-In so(0) many countries they are marching to demand more rightS for women due to (??) I'D SAY "BECAUSE" in the twenty-FIRST century there aRE a lot of women without the same rightS AS men
-It’s a day TO celebratE the past achievementS
-what they are going TO DO and can do in THE future.